Feedback

We pitched to the class our ideas for our thriller and they made some decent points about it like how it might be stepping into a horror slightly. They also wanted to know the reasons for the characters being in the wood in the first place. they also asked about the music which we hadn't made yet and some people thought it was too unclear.

From these points we are thinking of ways to keep the thriller conventions without stepping into horror too much although we will probably make it a thriller/Horror. We have also been thinking of motives for the characters being in he woods and we think we want to kept it unclear on whats happening so as to make the audience want to watch on and see what happens.

Real thriller Opening

i thought this opening seemed quite good with the panning of buildings and the titles that move with the shot. the shots taken didn't make it a thriller as it could be a romantic comedy but you can tell its a thriller because of the dark undertone of the soundtrack. it also shows the main characters towards the end and they are rushed and stressed setting the scene for a conventional thriller.