Storyboard- Version 2

After version 1 of the storyboard, it was only 6 or so slides in very rough sketches, I created a new one. So far it is about 15 slides long, however it's still sketchy but very legible. It is much more in depth compared to the other one and the slides are much more closer together, representing different camera angles, and more like the actual opening we will film.
Altogether I think it's very good, much better than the first, however still needs improving...