Thriller: Idea 1

Our idea is based on many different thrillers such as "The Blair Witch Project".
Location: Woods

Main story (brief):
*Straight into shot of Jordan running in despair from something...
*He takes shelter in what he thinks is the safe shack...
*Close up of Jordan's face/whole body huddled in the corner (quite dark)
*Straight cut to outside of the shack, after hearing crackles of sticks/twigs crunched underfoot...
* Screams from inside, and then static...
*CUT TO PRESENT TIME!
*Nick+Paul, close up somewhere, camera shot follows of a whole body shot in the woods...
*They see the shack, and with curiosity walk towards it. See blood in the shack, and hear more crunching underfoot...like last time.
*Extreme close ups, SCARED!

END!